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 Post Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 11:52 am    Post subject: Battle of Brentaal
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Forces:
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Kerrigan (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Duran (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Flames of Corulag (Front Plane)
Executor-Class Star Destroyer Traumatize (Front Plane)
YT-1300 freighter (Front Plane)(Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Ultralisk (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Mutalisk (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Defiler (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Morose (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Firebat (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Henk (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Adjudicator (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Vindictive (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Crimson Empire (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Hannibal (Front Plane)
Akula-Class Star Destroyer Pursuit (Front Plane)

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Golan III Battle Station 4
-[10,316] IK-9 Space Mines

-[10] SLD
-[500] DF. 9
-[500] Golan Arms Batteries
-[150] Planetary Heavy Ion Cannon PHIC-23
-[150,000] Union Guard
-[1,000] Droid Atmospheric Transport
-[500] Heavy Assualt Tank
-[5,000] Chameleon Type Droids
-[400] Spider Droids
-[500]Firehail Droids
-[500] Tridroids

Lambda Cruiser: Death’s Shadow
Democratic Warrior:Angel's Fox
Democratic Warrior:Serendipity
Democratic Warrior:Divine Intervention
Democratic Warrior:Firestone
Democratic Warrior: Leopard's Spot
Democratic Warrior: Oblivion
Democratic Warrior: Shadowru
Lambda Droid Control Ship: Revelator
Lambda Droid Control Ship: Destiny
Lambda Droid Control Ship: Geonosis
Lambda Droid Control Ship: Redeemer
Lambda Droid Control Ship: Atamange
Lambda Droid Control Ship: Sorcerer
Lambda Droid Control Ship: Freelancer
Lambda Droid Control Ship: Liberty
Lambda Droid Control Ship: Faithful
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Death's Grasp
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Dragon Claw
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Hawk
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Imprisonment
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Crow
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Rescuer
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Capturer
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Taeka
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Gem
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Pirate
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Raven
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Palies
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Darkness
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Gunnivere
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Mossimo
Lambda Boarding Class Starship:Killer's Heart
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Hunter
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Helsing
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Hummer
Lambda Boarding Class Starship: Rishi
[LMC Group 1 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
[LMC Group 2 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
[LMC Group 3 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
[LMC Group 4 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
[LMC Group 5 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
[LMC Group 6 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
[LMC Group 7 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
[LMC Group 8 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
[LMC Group 9 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
[LMC Group 10 consisting of 10 Lambda Mini Cruisers]
Liberator Cruiser: Calsetti
Liberator Cruiser: Fairlane
Liberator Cruiser: Kingswood
Liberator Cruiser: Falcon
Liberator Cruiser: Paramatter
Liberator Cruiser: Broken Hill
Liberator Cruiser: Peak Hill
Liberator Cruiser: Lamina
Liberator Cruiser: Ultimo
Liberator Cruiser: Prymont
Liberator Cruiser: Sainsbury
Liberator Cruiser: Colette
Liberator Cruiser: Voyager
Liberator Cruiser: Swan
Liberator Cruiser: Macbeth
Liberator Cruiser: Margarita
Liberator Cruiser: Bankstown
Liberator Cruiser: Holden
Liberator Cruiser: Speare
Liberator Cruiser: Dooku
Liberator Cruiser: Hope
Liberator Cruiser: Sydney
Liberator Cruiser: Roxio
Liberator Cruiser: Foxtel
Liberator Cruiser: Austar
Carrack-class Cruiser: Obliteration
Carrack-class Cruiser: Republic Dawn
Corellian Gunship: Fear's heart
Corellian Gunship: Obliteration II
Corellian Gunship: Pessimism
Corellian Gunship: Purgatory
Corellian Gunship: Ferocity
[Group 1 of DRWP Blastboats consisting of 100 Blastboats]
[Group 2 of DRWP Blastboats consisting of 100 Blastboats]
[Group 3 of DRWP Blastboats consisting of 100 Blastboats]
[Group 4 of DRWP Blastboats consisting of 100 Blastboats]
[Group 5 of DRWP Blastboats consisting of 100 Blastboats]
[20,000 Droid Starfighters]






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The Akula rushed from hyperspace in a hail of starlines and dissipating blue haze. As the ship found orbit of Brentaal, Admiral Nubis made his way to the bridge in time to catch sight of the hostile targets.

"Captain, bring the ship to full combat readiness. Engage the platforms with full firepower. I want everything we have hitting those stations. Equal spread, Pall."

Pall got right to work; buzzing from panel to panel ordering the pit crew to carry out the Admiral's commands. "Standing by, Admiral."

"Good, fire on my mark, Captain."

There was a deadly silence. Nubis took several steps down the command walkway to gaze into one of the "viewports." The ship rotated into position; giving it the ability to use all firing surfaces in their impending attack on the stations. Finally, Nubis noted, the ship was ready.

Taking a deep breath, Nubis cried out, "Mark!"

A hail of emerald light flashed outward from the Akula and towards the awaiting Golan Platforms.
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 Post Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 8:12 am    Post subject: The Battle of Brentaal (Split when trying to remove OOC)
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Golan III Station IV

The Commodore gladly accepted the field trip of Brentaal's finest Elementary school. All the small children, a group of 30, were taking a field trip to visit one of the most powerful Golan III Battlestations in the sector.

Commodore Otherwendle walked to the hanger to greet the small children. They piled out of their school shuttle with small but yet excited little faces. "This is why we are here...To protect small children so that they might grow."

They began the tour the little kids asking questions like, "What does that button do?" and "Whats his job?". They stopped, on the command center to conclude the field trip. And thats when all hell broke lose.

"SIR! INCOMING IMPERIAL SHIP, AKULA!"

The Commodore spun around, the frighten children huddled around their teacher and began to cry.

"The Akula is coming in rather fast, took a few mine blasts to its hull though...And its still coming. Looks like its going to-"

"BLAST IT!" the Commodore ordered

The Golan II and its sister Golan opened fire together aimed at the Incoming Akula.

"PLANETARY ION CANNONS! FIRE!"

75 Planetary Ion Cannons were ready and fired.

"Hail the surface, we need the shield up" the commodore ordered for the children to be put in the cargo hold and that snacks or some kind of comfront be given to them...

"Aye sir." he watched the small children walked away in tears wondering if they would ever see their families again then his eyes fell upon the sensor screen.

"Get me the other Golans...Have them maneuver to attack..." he ordered

"Aye sir."

"And...Lt...Bring another 5,000 mines to this location." the Commodore said with a grim face.

Yes, Alex, this was edited. You do not determine damages. I have said this repeatedly, and yet you continue to do so. Stop now.
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The stillness of space was interrupted by the arrival of the Akula. The behemoth glided towards the planet, but was hit by at least twenty of the IK-9 mines, dealing minor damage to the bare hull. As the shields of the Akula came online to protect the ship from the war that was in the not-so-distant future, sensory technicians reported nearly 2,000 more of the mines impacted the shields.

Assured that the protective energy field had only suffered minor damage, Admiral Serin pressed forward to attack the Golan III platform, suspended above the planet like a leaf blown softly above a lake. The Akula fired with its full, vengeful power, hammering the station with pristine green and red lasers, as well as physical weapons. The salvo of ion cannons were the first to impact, arcing their destructive energies into all the systems aboard the Golan. It wasn’t long until the crew aboard found that the shields had failed, and that many other systems were beginning to cascade along with it, but they did not have time to react as they were totally incinerated by the following stream of weapons from the Akula. The 9th Golan III Platform collapsed in on itself, any remnants of the metal structure being torn to atoms by the destructive force of the Akula.

Red lances of ionization flew from 75 of the PHICs, seemingly tucked away safely on the surface. As the streams contacted with the confident Akula, weapons, sensors and power systems took the brunt of the attack. As more bolts found their mark, power conduits ruptured and left the ship in darkness, leaving the crew to sit and wait for another attack, and orders from their commander.

As both sides prepared for another deadly volley, Imperial reinforcements emmerged from the void of hyperspace, guns blazing and ready to defended the wounded Akula
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The man moved inside of the holding are where his troops were held and nodded to them all and spoke out."MEN!"."We are about to go back into the fray as we have many times before.This time we are going to be doing something noone else in the empire has done before.Make ready and let this be the last one."With that he headed over to where his cpts were discussing plans.All he had to do now was wait for the opertune moment and he would be on his way
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"Admiral has the con. This is my first battle with you, so I'm going to lay this straight, like I did with Terminator. Every miss is a castration. Got it? Good.

Traumatize, Kerrigan, Duran, Flames of Corulag:

Fore guns on planetary ion cannons, starboard and port focus on bombarding planetary shield generators.

All available Akula class, set your missiles to fire on any and all mines, your primary target being the incoming mines, secondary targets on the rest of them.

YT-1300, pilot yourself to drag remaining mines away from the prototype towards Golan stations 7 and 8. Blast any that get too close to your ship.

NOW RIP 'EM A NEW ONE!"
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The Akula rumbled as the power systems began flickering off and on and then finally off. "Admiral, all power is down, sir. The only thing we have is basic life support. We should last well enough to get the power back on."

Nubis smiled a little. "Funny, they thought they had us at 'hello.'"

"Orders, Admiral," Pall questioned.

"For the moment, we can't do much, Captain. However, it would do us well to ensure that when the power is restored, all weapons and shield systems are operating at their fullest. So having said that, Captain, go about normal operations. We need to be ready at a moment's notice."

Pall smiled. This is how a true commander leads, he thought. "Attention all systems! Continue normal operations as if we had power. Shields, have systems ready for the power to come back on. Those shields need to spark on instantly when we have power. Weapons, the same for you. Get to work, gentlemen!"

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"Commodore, The first Akula is completely disabled." the Lt.

A small cheer went over the command deck.

The Commodore nodded and gave the orders, "Now. Planetary Ion Cannons, 76-150 should be ready to fire. Fire on that Executor!"

The Commodore watched as 75 shots fired towards the Executor. "Golan 1 and 2 open complete fire onto the ASD-x Akula. Set turbolasers to 50% for a faster recharge."

The commodore turned, "Commander Diggins, you are the best at mine field operations, I want you to take control of the mine field via remote. Steer all 33,000 into the executor. Make sure you do a continuous scan of the shielding..."

The commodore turned again to face a female officer,"Captain, Ion Cannons 1-75 should be ready to fire. Have them evenly spread their attack on Akulas, Duran and Kerrigan."

"Golan Battlestations 5, 6, 10 target and attack the Executor. Set turbolasers at 50%. Fire all missiles, torpedoes, everything we have!"

"Aye aye" came a few responses

"Golan Battlestations 7 and 8, each pick a favorite parallel Akula and open fire with the same settings as battlestations 5,6 and 10.

"This battlestation along with our sister, Battlestation 4, will target and attempt to destroy the Executor's command bridge, if we achieve in disrupting its shields. Turbolasers at 50% gentlemen."

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"Commodore, Our SLDs will be ready to protect your Golans when they reach 20% shielding or less. Keep up the fight."
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As the Akula diligently worked on her repairs, more streams of ion blasts hissed through the atmosphere of the planet and entered the vacuum of space. The first barrage, aimed at the Traumatize, only scored a few hits, the ship-in-motion avoided most of the PHIC blasts. However, technicians onboard the vessel had to quickly reconfigure the power systems, since the crippling ion blasts had dealt significant damage to main power.

37 more ionized bolts flew towards the Kerrigan and the Duran each. They were slightly more successful than the last salvo fired, bringing hyperdrive systems on both ships down to emergency levels, but did not disable any systems completely.

As the Akulas repaired their damages, thousands of mines began their metaphorical suicide run on the Traumatize. However, hundreds of concussion missiles were spewed out at the approaching mines, causing a significant chain reaction within the warband and incinerated the majority of the onslaught. Nevertheless, at least 3,000 slammed into the Executor-class ship, weakening the shields slightly.

The Imperial armada unleashed their fury on the planet, turbolasers firing huge amounts of energy into the surface. Though many missed their intended targets, the sheer amount firepower and the hundreds of accurate bolts were still adequate to entirely obliterate all Planetary Ion Cannons and SLD Shield Generators. They were now smoldering craters of circuits and durasteel.

As the DRWP Golan III Platforms achieved a weapons lock on the Imperial ships, the YT-1300 drug at least a thousand of the mines towards G3P 7. However, the Golans were unable to fire until their weapons were fully powered, and the small YT-1300 had not yet reached its target. Within the next few minutes, both adversaries would clearly be able to deal their punishment on the enemy.

As the next round of volleys was ready to begin, the crew of the Akula cheered as power was restored. It was back in the fight.
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The cheering on the bridge of the Akula became deadly quiet as Vice Admiral Serin made his way to the end of the command walkway. "Captain," he shouted, "bring the ship around to the far side of Brentaal."

There was a slight pause.

"Now, Captain!"

The Akula, once more finding its strength, began its trip to the planet's far side and out of harm's way.
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"OK, now that we're basically surrounded...

Kerrigan, forward cannons on Golan 5. Port cannons on Golan 3. Starboard cannons on Golan 8. Aft cannons on Golan 1.

Flames of Corulag, forward cannons on Golan 3. Port cannons on Golan 2. Starboard cannons on Golan 5. Aft cannons on Golan 1.

Duran, forward cannons on Golan 8. Port cannons on Golan 5. Starboard cannons on Golan 7. Aft cannons on Golan 6.

Akulas, fire with your ions first, then follow up with your turbolasers and lasers. If we encounter any fighter resistance, fire upon them with missiles.

Traumatize, dock with Golan 4. Colonel Atius, give 'em hell."
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"This is Emperor," said a voice crackly and chopped up as the transmission that was being sent as far as Contruum relayed off Brentaal communication center, and to the Imperial fleet's transceivers, "Brote Heckler, I am here to tell you all that the war has ended, a formal agreement over a peace treaty has not yet been signed. But an agreement over the air ways between your chief of state, Emperor Vader and me has been found to be valid. So, anything bigger then a frigate is to leave the space over Brentaal... now." The message came in clearer as it went on, and then flickered off as it came to an end.
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"I see...," I said, "All hands, reinitiate previous orders immediately."
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"Alright crews, this is Commodore Otherwendle, time for 'real' aggressive measures, Golans one through four I want a full attack on the Traumatize. The rest of you except for five and six... I want an attack on the Akulas. Five and six hit that damned YT-1300... kill it. I also would like one thosand mines to go for each of those ASDs, and that Executor-Class, home in, and destroy, nothing fancy... and what fighters do we have? Send them out and kick some butt!" Said the Commodore as he watched his battle screen with a hawkeye...
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This time, the DRWP forces had the initiative, crimson lances of turbolaser fire issuing from the Golans, scarlet exhaust trails of proton torpedoes, and waves of mines rushing at the Imperial fleet. But despite the 420 Gigatons each mine assault imparted to its target, and the perfect accuracy of the gunners in each station (despite the Akula moving away from the thickest part of the battle and presenting a challenge to gunners), not a shield wavered. The powerful energy fields surrounding the Imperial vessels seemed impregnable.

The Traumatize closed with Golan 4 and docked with it as the remaining three Akulas ripped into the defenses over the planet. Waves of emerald fire poured from the ships, and when all was said and done, in place of Golan III Platforms One, Three, Five, and Eight were expanding clouds of superheated gas and debris.
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Hearing the good to go he quickly moved his men to the airlock and opend the door.Silently looking inside he orderd the first squad to toss in some thermal detonaters and get back.Watching the men do so he simply waited for the loud explosions to occur,Once they did the first squad of 25 men rushed through the airlock soon followed by another squad.The colonel himself followed with the third squad.Once inside he began giving orders to the men"Alright were inside,So i want squads of 25 men searching through each room for the children,DONT HARM ANY CIVILIANS!.I also want 40 men to accompany me to the main control room so we can see whats goin on and possibly see if theres anything of use on this station.MOVE MOVE MOVE!"He said as he headed off down a hallway supported by the 40 men.Soon all 4,850 men poured into the station searching in and out every room.He soon heard blaster shots ripping through the station and not long after the comm opend up"Colonel we have found them.Their was some light resistance but we have them.Good,Now take them back to the ship safly and make shure noone is harmed.Everyone else clear out the station of all Enemy opposition.But DONT HARM CIVILIANS"I said once more still heading for the comm
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Okay, since no one thought to post after Atius, we had to skip a turn. It is now turn five. Now then... how about posting before EVERYONE'S fleets show up here?

EDIT: Brote made an interesting point on MSN about the access point for the station being locked. However, to avoid messy edits and deletions, the Imperial troops attacked the door when boarding, it blew last turn. There,, now everything's caught up.

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Watching the troops blow open the door he stood in the frontline with them and charged in through the airlock.He was quickly followed by a group of 50 men and they set up a block at the airlock and began to hold it down securly and tightly.The next task was finding the kids but first he had to make out a plan of attack.
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"Kerrigan, fore weapons on G10, starboard weapons on G7, port weapons on G2, and aft weapons on G6.

Flames of Corulag, fore weapons on G10, port weapons on G2, starboard weapons set to flak on those mines, aft weapons on G6.

Duran, fore weapons on G10, starboard weapons on G7, port weapons set to flak on those mines, and aft weapons on G6.

Traumatize, maintain dock with G4 and set a perimeter around our side of the airlock."
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A Crew member walked to the side of the Commodore, he turned.

“They have broken through… are the children safe?” Said the Commodore in a glum tone as he then turned back to a map of the station.

“They are me Lord,” the Crew member said with great impressiveness. The Commodore surveyed the plans for a counter assault on the enemy fleet, an Elite Blood Guard General stood on the other side pointing out certain points of attack.

“Commodore… it would seem we are in a drier situation… these Imperials are closing in… and no further word from the Emperor has come in whether or not he has made a cease fire. These Imperials will not stop… not till we are dead.” Spoke the also disciplined soldier turned impressive by the situation. It was two minutes after this a sudden jolt hit the station. An alarm rang, the Commodore and the General were thrown over the table, and they fell not far from where they were standing.

“Report Crewman!” shouted the Commodore as he got to his feet.

“The Enemy Executor has attached to us, they have breached the hull and are inside, men are engaging and forces are on there way to stop them. Sire, what are your orders for the rest of the fleet?” Said the Crewman with a distressed tone, he was scared. The Commodore could tell they were all scared… they were all on the brink of giving up. He looked at them, he could tell they were using every thing they were trained, everything beat into them in the training camps of the Union. The Union… it was not so long ago it was nothing. Now they were fighting… and dieing for it.

“Men… I won’t lie to you… on this day we will die, we will fall into nothingness. No one will remember us, we will fall and no one will care. But if we stand up, and fight, fight on! Fight on comrades! If we move together, push one another to our limits; forward ourselves to the position of greatness. No man will ever forgive us for it. We will not be forgotten. We will be remembered and no man will be able to not hear our names… Brothers, sisters… our time to stand and fight for what we joined up for… for what we believed in… for our Union, for our leader… for our world! Let this be the day of the last stand of the Brentaal Brotherhood! May we comrades… see our families once more…” The Commodore gave his voice a rise in tone, the voice went from ship to ship, it stretched to the surface of Brentaal, to the ends of the Union. The commander of the fleet forces returned his stance to look at his plans again. He looked forward, a tear rippled from his eye… it fell to the floor.

“General, I want at least 10,000 mines on the Kerrigan, and I want G10 and G6 with support from G2 to give Kerrigan a little bit more hell… Everything else including our gun on the Traumatize, spare the rest of our mines for later, keep them from flak range.” The Captain of the Brotherhood gave his orders, and sat in his chair… the tears he once had he now repressed.
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The Imperial troops rushed aboard the Golan, only to run headlong into a wall of fierce resistance. A trap was sprung as soon as the Imperial troops crossed the threshold from the Traumatize to the Golan. A bomb exploded in the middle of the line of troops rushing aboard, killing a dozen stormtroopers. However, Colonel Atius was away from the blast.

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The Kerrigan surged forward, bringing its massive body to a wedge between several of the Golan platforms surrounding the planet. Fury erupted from the turbolasers, bright bolts racing towards the defenses.

The Golans returned fire, lances of destructive fury flying back at the Akula, accompanied by a myriad of proton torpedoes. The ordinance struck in the Akula-class ship, dealing damage to the shields. However, the Golans never got a chance to fire a second salvo, as they were all entirely obliterated by the gigantic Imperial vessel.

The second surviving platform, Golan 10, was obliterated as the Flames of Corulag and Duran surged forward, turbolasers blasting the platform into embers.

With Golan 4 currently under troop attack, all significant defenses were gone and citizens of Brentaal waited in fear, which was only intensified as Imperial reinforcements arrived, spelling doom for the DRWP. As the Imperials gave up a cheer in the destruction of the Golans, 10,000 mines were redirected towards the fleet.
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"We need to give them army boys a clear sky to land. Set guns to flak and dispose of the remaining mines."
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Legions of mines swarmed the Kerrigan as turbolaser fire from the Imperial fleet cut into them. Ten thousand mines attacked. Four thousand survived to final obliteration against the shields of the Imperial warship. The ship jarred and shook fiercely, yet still her shields held.

On board the Golan III Platform, Imperial and DRWP soldiers battled for control, neither side gaining much ground, instead hunkering behind cover and exchanging fire with no orders to advance given,

Then, the tides seemed to change. Fresh from Ruusan, the DRWP Second Fleet dropped from hyperspace on the far side of the planet. However, this turn of events wasn't known to the Imperials, their sight blocked by Brentaal's bulk.

There... that should get you guys posting in here. It's not fun just doing one side, you know.Joke
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Kneeling down in the airlock he watched as his men battle the Enemy forces.They had sustained casualties but he was certain that they may have caused more to the other side.Surveying the area where the drwp was he yelled the command to his men"Throw thermal detonaters!.When they have blown rush them.The smoke and explosion will cause them to be shocked for a moment be quick.When you men rush foreward i want more men to move up and take their positons.Now move out!"He grimaced from inside of his mask hoping that this would work.If it didnt he would simply overwhelm them and crush them all down like the bastards they were.
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Okay... this is getting silly. Would someone PLEASE find Brote and get him to post?

Dozens of grenades flew through the air and into the DRWP troops. Seconds later, they detonated, killing 25 of the surviving 28 troopers. The three remaining men fell, taking down a few stormtroopers before they did. But now the Imperials had cleared a beachhead, and troops began to pour in from the Traumatize.
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You're funny, Ams. Finding Brote is easy. Getting him to post is like pulling teeth. It just doesn't happen - it's unnatural for him to post.
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Situation's being handled. Imperial commanders, continue the battle.
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"Just get rid of the mines. Continue this activity until further notice," I ordered casually.
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"We're under attack by the Imperials!" Commodore Otherwendle exclaimed. "Even now, Imperial troopers are boarding my station!"
"I see. We will do what we can," the fleet commander answered. "Launch all fighters! Strike the Imperials quickly and hard if Brentaal is to survive."


More mines rushed at the Kerrigan, and more turbolasers cut into them. Four thousand vaporized from Imperial guns and sympathetic explosions before the last 6,138 mines slammed into the Imperial vessel. But something new appeared on Imperial sensors: a thousand score of fighters, streaming around the planet Brentaal. The tables were turning, it seemed.
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"New orders. All Akula class, focus missile, proton torpedo, and turbolaser fire (on flak) at the incoming fighters.

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Carnor Jax sat in his room on Yinchorr. His internal commlink chimed, and he twitched it to life. His eye screens lit up with statistics for the ongoing battle, and his fist curled before slamming down on the desk befor ehim. He turned to the secure commlink and punched in a security code, and the blue-scanned image of the Grand Marshal appeared to the fleet over Brentaal.

"I want all but 10 wings of Defenders, and the entire Executor compliment out there NOW! Engage the starfighters, leave NONE intact. I want Defender Wings At, Bet, and Chet to concentrate Ion cannons on the first rank of fighters - disable the froward rank, the others have to break of preprogrammed flight plans. Take advantage of their relay lag times and blast them out of the sky. Do not engage them in areas of flak - draw them to open space. Use the Akulas to screen yourselves from enemy return fire... leave none alive.

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Watching the smoke settle from the rush he watched as a few more of his troopers were taken down but the enemy was finnaly overpowerd.They had secured the beachead and now all they had to do was capture the kids.Thinking for a minute he simply yelled out his orders to the men."I want twenty man fire teams everyone spread out through the ship if you get into a large firefight throw thermal detonaters to thin them out we will have reserve troops waiting here.I want thirty more men to come with me to the main control station.Move it out!"He said as he readied his blaster and headed foreward with the men.Soon enough they would be spread all over the station.But he had no doubts in his mind that he would lose the station unless they had a big surprise in store for him.
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Thousands of torpedoes and missiles burst from their tubes, then veered sharply into the swarm of droid fighters. Each sought out its own target, and tracked it until mutual annihilation. So effective were the missiles and torpedoes that the tubolaser flak merely hit debris. 20,000 droid fighters were launched. Only 400 were left to fire missiles into the Kerrigan.

As the DRWP fighters advanced, were slaughtered, and returned fire, the rest of the fleet began to go around the planet, never breaking formation: Liberators in front, backed by Carrack cruisers surrounded by Blastboats, a Droid Control ship and Democratic Warrior leading a line of Democratic Warriors, five more Droid Control ships behind that, and Lambda Mini-Cruiser groups on the left rear flank.
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Junior Marshal Guildis Crim watched as 'droid fighters exploded on all sides into clouds of superheaded gas. He smiled grimly, then turned to the holonet. "Fighters, I want all remaining bogies destroyed. Each fighter, single out a target and eliminate the threat. Once that is finished, I want you to go after the gunboats. Circle around and attack on the flanks, Ion Cannons first, then follow with torpedos and concussion missiles."

He smiled as he watched the defenders whip into action, admiring the effectiveness of the Akulas.
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A fire burst to life in Swali's eyes. The Admiral looked at the oncoming fleet with Imperial zeal. He quickly went through a plan in his head and then put it into words.

"This is it. Do or die. We see the enemy before us and the time has come. This could be the most pivotal part of the war. The outcome of the next few minutes could mean win or lose. Now:

All ships, split your turbolasers and ion cannons like we always do: fore, starboard, and port. Now listen up to what guns are going to be shooting at what.

Ultralisk, assign your turbolasers to fire at the Liberator Cruisers Kingswood, Falcon, and Paramatter. Assign your ion cannons to the Democratic Warriors Firestone, Leopard's Spot, and Oblivion.

Mutalisk, set your turbolasers to fire at the Liberator cruisers Broken Hill, Peak Hill, and Lamina. Aim your ions at Democratic Warrior Shadowru and Liberator Cruisers Ultimo and Prymont.

Kerrigan, turbolasers on Liberator Cruisers Sainsbury, Colette, Voyager. Ions to Swan, Macbeth, and Margarita.

Duran, aim your turbolasers at the Liberator Cruisers Bankstown, Holden, and Speare. Set your ions to Dooku, Hope, and Sydney.

Flames of Corulag, turbolasers at the Liberator Cruisers Roxio, Foxtel, and Austar. Fire your ions on the Lambda Mini Cruiser groups 6, 7, and 8.

Defiler, send Lambda Mini Cruiser Groups 9 and 10, along with the Lambda Cruiser Death's Shadow, straight to hell with your turbolasers. Disable Boarding Classes Capturer, Taeka, and Gem with your ions.

Morose, send a turbolaser greeting to Boarding Classes Pirate, Raven, and Palies. Give ions to Darkness, Gunnivere, and Mossimo.

Firebat, turbolasers at Boarding Classes Killer's Heart, Hunter, and Helsing. Ions on Hummer, Rishi, and Revelator.

Henk, shoot your turbolasers at Lambda Cruiser Death's Shadow and Liebrator Cruisers Calsetti and Fairlane. Ions to the Droid Control ships Destiny, Geonosis, and Redeemer.

Adjudicator, turbolasers at Democratic Warriors Angel's Fox, Serendipity, and Divine Intervention. Ions at Droid Control ships Atamange, Sorcerer, and Freelancer.

Vindictive, fire turbolasers at Lambda Mini Cruiser groups 1, 2, and 3. Fire ions at the Droid Control ships Liberty and Faithful and at the Carrack cruiser Obliteration.

Crimson Empire, fire turbolasers at Lambda Mini Cruiser groups 4, 5, 6. Ions at the Carrack cruiser Republic Dawn and at Corellian Gunships Fear's Heart and Obliteration II.

Hannibal, turbolasers on Lambda Mini Cruiser groups 7, 8, and 9. Ions on Corellian gunships Pessimism, Purgatory, and Ferocity.

Pursuit, turbolasers on Lambda Mini Cruiser groups 1, 2, and 10. Ions on Lambda Mini Cruiser groups 3, 4, and 5.

All Akulas, fire your proton torpedoes and missiles at the Blastboats.

Traumatize, as soon as we have confirmation that the Golan is captured, disembark from the station and engage fire on any targets not already being fired upon with ions and fire on all ships disabled by ions with medium turbolasers and use heavy turbolasers for anything not disabled that remains.
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The commander of the Second Fleet wished Audacious hadn't left just after Ruusan. Regardless, he gave the orders he thought the Admiral would give.
"Liberators, focus on the damaged Akula with ion cannons and turbolasers. LMC groups will target that Super Star Destroyer. Boarding class, stand ready to storm any disabled ships. No doubt the Emperor would like to look over these ships.
Blastboats and droid fighters, hit the Imperial fighters as hard as you can. Gunships, too. Carracks will engage the damaged Akula. Droid Control Ships, land your troops and bolster defenses."
A trickle of nervous sweat ran down the commander's spine. "Democratic Warriors, you will follow us and we will engage the Super. Let's make these Imps pay for Corulag."

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The battle is over. All DRWP personnel are evacced to the 2nd fleet, and Brentaal has been turned over to the Empire.
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water is really cat piss
Supreme Moff Ams Jendob--Tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow, creeps this petty pace... says:
ROFL.
VvD says:
Its good with some Soy Sauce
Crazed says:
...cat piss?

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