Carnor Jax Vs. All Comers
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 Post Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 9:46 pm    Post subject: Carnor Jax Vs. All Comers
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Jax stood on the Yinchorri battlefield, a never-ending expanse of red-sand desert. His crimson and black armor stood out in sharp contrast to the rising sun, his cloak whipping about his frame as he simply watched, and waited...

A shining steel double-vibroglaive was held vetically in his fists before him, reflecting the sunrise in the polished metal. His stance was that of impassive neutrality, his armored body motionless.
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 Post Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 1:44 pm    Post subject:
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Just checking, but All Comers means anyone, right? If not, disregard this post.

Xaph's first thought was of how similar their armor was, both in hue and in coverage. Xaph's armor covered both his neck and joints, where as Jax's was more flexible, more maneuverable. No matter. Xaph wouldn't be doing gymnastics here.

He rose his assault rifle up to his shoulder, taking careful aim for the neck. He was just outside Carnor's field of vision, off to his left. The Grand Marshal still hadn't moved. Xaph pulled the trigger.
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 Post Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 9:40 pm    Post subject:
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A snap of the Sovereign Protectors arm brought his vibroglaive up to his left side, deflecting the blaster bolt directly at Xaph's feet. His voice was a low, contemptuous chuckle as he turned to face his opponent. "You breathe so loud I could kill you in my sleep. Try again."

He flipped the glaive over his wrist and brought it to an offensive stance, still tanding about ten meters away.
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And thus, a sword could be heard in the dark of the right corner of the room. He crept from out of the shadows, arrade for battle, his Corulagian armor of diamond, anicent in age, but fresh in luster shining in the light. His length of seven feet and two inches was adorned the luster and shine of the diamond, his armor thin and light but strong through diamond and durasteel. He crouched in a prepared position to strike. His vibroblade brimming in sonic vibrations, he pointed it toward his opponent, Carnor, in silence.
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 Post Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 2:13 am    Post subject:
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Xaph snapped his head to the right. Another challenger? This was his bounty, and he was going to prove it. Knowing that Carnor's gaze was still on him, Xaph opened fire on the newcomer.
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 Post Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 10:30 am    Post subject:
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With nothing else to do, Kyle Katarn strode into the arena, a black cloak billowing behind him. Nevertheless, he looked like any Galactic Alliance commando, armed with the standard weapons. The one subtle difference was that he had a lightsaber hidden, to be used when he finally got tired of toying around with these... fools. (Joke)

Immediately, he fired a few quick shots from his sniper rifle, before dropping it on the ground before him, his hands held casually at his side, ready.
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 Post Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 10:56 am    Post subject:
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BTW guys, this forum is not SWVII "Canon" It's just a place to practice combat posts.
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 Post Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 11:04 am    Post subject:
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Gavin Young wrote:
BTW guys, this forum is not SWVII "Canon" It's just a place to practice combat posts.

Still, it is much funner for it to be canon...
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 Post Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 11:16 am    Post subject:
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If that was about the Bounty thing, it was just flavor text.
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 Post Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 12:32 pm    Post subject:
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Jax let his smile widen beneath his helm, spinning with deadly grace, throwing the double vibroglaive aside and reaching for his belt. With a snap-hiss from two rather plain looking black durasteel tubes, two silver lightsaber blades erupted into existance, deflecting the shots of both Xaph and Acer. He flipped the sabers around to a dual-saber Djem-So low guard, his voice a distant rumble.

"Three against one... I like these odds. Attack me, if you dare."
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 Post Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 12:40 pm    Post subject:
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Suddenly Xaph was unable to move, as a force of air lifted him high in the air and started to spin him around. The others, confused, stared around. Suddenly a white-clad woman walked onto the arena, a blaster in her hands, and another unknown weapon in a holster on her belt.
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 Post Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 12:52 pm    Post subject:
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A dark figure, hidden in shadow saw Xaph begin to fly and saw the woman in white below, lifting him. His left hand gripped the mace in it ever tighter. Red eyes popped through slots, and with his right hand and left joined he grabbed the mace and held it high. He leapt infront of the woman and swung, smacking her across the back.
He then approached Jax and prepared for another swing. "Fool. You have challenged the mightiest power in the universe!"
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In the ochre rocks of Yinchorr that speared up into the sky, Alexus Sienar readied his weapons. Laying his vibrosword to his left and a repeating blaster to his right, he took out his pride and joy - a gleaming black sniper rifle, a full metre and a half long with a scope that could pick out the nostril hairs of a housefly. He hefted it and aimed down at the arena, picking a target.
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Teneniel's eyes widen as the mace came into contact with the armor hidden below the white dress. Seeing the hideous creature running towards Jax, she flings out Xaph and quickly concentrated her power on the red-eye monster. It wasn't long before the monster was lifted into the air like Xaph, but Teneniel had something else in mind. Twirling him faster and faster, Teneniel suddenly force push him at Jax, and with mind numbing speed, the hideous creature flies towards Jax with the mace swinging...
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He stood from the twirl that the witch had put him in. He lifted his arm and raised her, but he used the Force to close her throat. He lifted his mace as he threw her to the side, and she landed in the dust and rocks. He then turned about and continued his assualt on Grand Marshal Jax.
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"About last night... was that condom working?"
Alexus - Moskau, Moskau, Wirf die Gläser an die Wand says:
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 Post Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 1:38 pm    Post subject:
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Force Storm means you can't move at all...
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You do realize how much he pwns you in FOrce Sensitivity and Force Storm needs to be CMACed as Exar Kun/Sora Bulq couldn't do it. Force Storms also destroy things, and can warded off if you know what to do. They also fade when you stop putting energy into it.
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Alexus - Moskau, Moskau, Wirf die Gläser an die Wand says:
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Alexus - Moskau, Moskau, Wirf die Gläser an die Wand says:
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"I've got VVD."
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I don't get it, how was I thrown into the air? I'm Force Sensitive to, I should have sensed it, right?
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Spell of Storm
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Force Storm cannot be used by anyone in the game for the moment... with one exception. But that's because he is the Chosen One.
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Spell of Storm is NOT Force Storm. Force Storm eats entire ships.
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Alexus - Moskau, Moskau, Wirf die Gläser an die Wand says:
"About last night... was that condom working?"
Alexus - Moskau, Moskau, Wirf die Gläser an die Wand says:
"Why? What's wrong?"
Alexus - Moskau, Moskau, Wirf die Gläser an die Wand says:
"I've got VVD."
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Yes, its not Force Storm. I misspoke.

It still remains that VVD cannot rise and choke someone in the middle of a whirlwind.

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You changed whom you were focusing on. Therefore your connection to the whirlwind died and I got free, choked you and ran back to Jax. Thi is not a FFA either. It is All vs Jax. Do not treat it like a FFA.
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Alexus - Moskau, Moskau, Wirf die Gläser an die Wand says:
"About last night... was that condom working?"
Alexus - Moskau, Moskau, Wirf die Gläser an die Wand says:
"Why? What's wrong?"
Alexus - Moskau, Moskau, Wirf die Gläser an die Wand says:
"I've got VVD."
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