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Arlyn
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 Post Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 7:53 pm    Post subject: Rakata Prime
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Ryan Davad's shuttle experience had to be the very essence that caused him to return to reality. What the crap had he done to ruin his relationship with Arlyn? His heart sank when the Mon Calamari Battle Cruiser disappeared overhead, she was truly gone. The attractive blonde female next to him was appealing, but not relationship wise. The woman to whom he owes his sentient existence to, was gone. His eyes stared into the surface they were rapidly approaching, a planet full of life, yet nothing appealing to the Human Replica Droid.

Great he thought. By the time of the Galaxy Ball, everything would be ruined. Allison released the controls as an autopilot tookover. She looked at Ryan and smiled casually. Ryan smiled back, but it was more polite than interested. Allison rose to her feet slowly, taking her Alliance uniform coat off. Why she had even brought it, Ryan couldn't decide fast enough before she was sitting in his lap.

Her warm and completely human fingers rubbed the back of his head, massaging the back part of his replicated neck. Ryan looked into her blue eyes and opened his lips to talk to her, but a finger from her other hand slid into his mouth. Ryan sat there for a moment, unsure how to react, as her finger probed the inside of his mouth. His tongue recoiled when she touched it, causing her to laugh teasingly.

Both of her hands retracted and she placed them onto the droid's chest, more specifically, his pectorial muscles. Ryan had decided she had gone far enough and luckily the Alliance diplomatic fleet arrived sooner than expected. A little button flashed, they were being hailed.

"Allison." her eyes follwed his and she tossed an annoying glance. She muttered something and stood up from the Human Droid's lap. Ryan felt a little more relaxed and the feeling of guilt disappeared as an older human appeared on the screen.

"Ambassador Davad, a pleasure to see you again." the man's voice matched the Chief of Diplomacy, just as his face came on the screen. Ryan was shocked that he would make a trip out here personally and it was an honor to be with him. As the human replica droid attempted to recall the files on the man, he spoke again. "Miss Allison Mack? Enjoying yourself are we?" His lips curled with enjoyment. Obviously Arlyn's father was well informed, "Ambassador, prepare the Rakatans for my arrival. I wish to oversee your diplomatic talks myself...I am beginning to wonder why they haven't joined us all ready."

Ryan nodded, "Yes, Chief." The man smiled and flashed Allison another look, then he was gone.

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Alexus
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 Post Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 3:04 am    Post subject:
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... Rakatans. RAKATANS. You CAN'T be serious!
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Arlyn
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 Post Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 11:35 pm    Post subject:
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Ryan Davad of the Alliance Ambassador Corps walked on the fresh planet of Rakata Prime. It's surface had not be reached by modern vessels for quite some time. No records of visits had been documented, at least. The Human Replica Droid walked with Miss Allison in tow towards the village that had been representated aboard the Independence II.

The droid's mind was concentrated on the upcoming meeting the Lucious Victorinox. He was a powerful new figure in Alliance Justice and Diplomacy figureheads. He soothed the Senate where it needed and agitated it in others. His presence on Rakata Prime was astonishing and rarely did he make visits outside of Denon.

Ryan, the once famed playmate, walked on the surface and was immediately greeted by the crude manner of blasters in his face. He quickly began to speak in their native language, calming and alarming both of the Rakatans.

"We are ambassadors of the Galactic Alliance!" the droid calmly told him, "We come on behalf of the great and diplomatic Senate of the Free people of the Galactic Alliance. Your leaders have allowed us to come and speak with them."

A shuttle was being detected by Ryan's internal sensors, he looked to the sky and his pupils zoomed. Lucious was beginning to approach. The Rakatans, several minutes later, had noticed the oncoming vessel and shouted at the 'invasion'.

"Another Ambassador. Our leader in diplomacy with other worlds" Ryan responded quickly. The Rakatan looked at him skeptically, but lowered his weapon. Allison muttered something about barbaric creatures, but luckily they were unable to translate that. The pair guards lead Ryan and Allison towards the visible landing of the Alliance shuttle. As the engine slowly disappeared and was replaced by the loud sound of the descending ramp.

Lucious Victorinox appeared flanked by two amazing looking bodyguard droids, some of Turbinia's finest and rarely seen. He was also accompanied by a pair of Alliance sniper troopers, which were apparently, some of the best shots in the galaxy. Why an ambassador would need such security, puzzeled the droid.

Lucious walked powerfully, in a sense, and stopped infront of the fellowship. He extended his arms in a peaceful greeting, one of his bodyguards translated. "Noble Rakatans. The Galactic Alliance, leaders of freedom and democracy, extend a special welcome into our democratic system. We bring peace and justice to this humble planet of yours."

The guards looked at him strangely, but bowed in his presence. He was a figure to be respected. Ryan saluted, as did Allison, but Lucious held up his hand. "Lead the way to your wonderful village." The Rakatans turned and began to walk at once, followed by the silent Lucious which allowed Allison and Ryan to fall in tow.

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 Post Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 11:02 am    Post subject:
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Ryan Davad stepped onto the hills of Rakata Prime, the long slopping green glory of their planet rested in the undecided fate that controlled centuries. The rulers bickered until blasters were drawn at each other, the primitive state would be impossible for them to overcome at this rate. Ryan Davad stood in the darkness overlooking the penetrated waters with ruins of ships thousands of years old. They were scattered, broken. Ryan Davad stood alone. His heart ached over the Thanagarian he had neglected. His eyes began to stimulate water for the emotions he was thinking and feeling and within seconds a single tear fell down the cheek of the Human Replica Droid. His sensors detected a human approaching, but he didn’t want to turn around.

It wasn’t Allison.

The man’s voice was strong and persuasive, “A charming young women, perhaps?” He asked. Ryan Davad nodded slyly wiping the tear from his face. Lucious Victorinox approached him and stared into the distance as well, the ever so silent waves beating against the shore. The two males overlooked the semi-sunken vessels. “When you look at those vessels, what do you see? Not the metal beginning to rust nor the parts or pieces. What do you see?” Lucious asked surprisingly.

Ryan Davad looked inside of himself and pictured the last thoughts of each of the crewmembers aboard the ships that had dived towards the oceans they were overlooking. “Fear. Regret. Death.” He suggested.

Lucious turned and remarked, “Brilliant.” He took one look at Ryan and began to walk away, his last remark was more reflective than the typical Lucious, “Are you one of those ships?” Ryan looked at them in a different way, since the human had made the point.

Ryan was not stranded. He was not hopelessly deserted. His eyes filled with determination as the Human Replica turned and returned to camp. The next day would hopefully bring about a better round of negotiations. For he had an Angel to catch.

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 Post Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 12:00 am    Post subject:
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The morning came quicker than Ryan had imagined. His dreaming programs had entered a possible scenario with Arlyn at the Galaxy Ball and the type of entrances they would make. The sun peered through his tent, causing him to stir to the early morning. The native birds chirped to the morning skies, singing to the birth of a new sun.

Immediately his sensors detected a small creature inside of his tent. It was a rodent of some sort and how it managed to sneak into his tent, cause Ryan to recalibrate his sensors to detect even the slightest of movements during his dream simulations.

The creature searched Ryan's packs until it came across the shirt part of Alliance's uniform. He cursed at the creature and reached for it when it took off into the open fields. Ryan couldn't believe he was just robbed by a furry native.

He grabbed his belt and blaster, dashing into the open skies. His bare chest catching the morning sun. Allison had emerged from her tent and stumbled back, as the half naked human replica droid dashed passed her. She laughed as she put the images together.

Lucious Victorinox had come back swearing in a different tongue, Ryan had translated from Huttese, apparently the negotiations were still at a stalemate. But Lucious stopped as the young male dashed passed him with a blaster in hand, after rodent.

"By the gods!" Lucious hissed in a comedic way.

The rodent made a lot of eradic dashes, making stunning nearly impossible, especially with the speed and rapid movement through trees and the brush. After almost five minutes, they entered a wide forest and it wasn't long before Ryan fired an accurate shot.

The rodent fell limp, the Alliance uniform laid in ruins with bite marks and spit. Ryan looked at it in disgust as he began to make his way back to camp, but he met the stomach of a Rancor.

It roared and swung for the human replica droid....

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 Post Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 11:25 am    Post subject:
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Ryan Davad sprung into action as the angry rancor roared into the open skies. Its massive arm swung towards the human replica droid, but the humanoid droid caught the rancor by surprise. With superhuman strength, Ryan tossed the rancor back a few feet.

Ryan switched his blaster from stun to maximum energy burst. He fired three rounds, the blaster shots hissing in the air alerting the Alliance camp he was in trouble. The rancor paused its attack, obviously the blaster shots showed a clear sign of trouble. Debating the odds, the brute decided to attack a second time.

The droid's 'adrenaline' was at its peak, allowing him to move faster than most creatures could see. A single blink in the rancor's eyes could prove fatal, but this rancor was faster than most. It slammed it's fists where Ryan had been just seconds before.

Ryan stopped, completely behind the creature, and pointed his blaster at the backside of its skull. One shot would end this beast’s life.

Death was ninety point forty-five percent sure. Ryan tossed the blaster aside, picking up a large log instead, hoping to knock the creature into a dreamful state versus taking it's life. He swung, the log breaking instantly upon impact and shattering across the grassy forest floor.

The rancor fell to the floor, its eyes rolling to the back of its skull. A large snort was heard before the dreamy breathing issued from its mouth. Ryan sighed relieved. His sweat glands had activated, but he switched them off. He looked at the broken fragments of the log he used and they were vibrating.

His sensors picked up four massive masses coming and coming fast. It was then his audio receiver detected THUD. THUD. THUD. THUD. THUD.

Members of a rancor pack emerged, encircling the droid, and roared into the open skies. Ryan looked at each...then glanced at the young rancor he had just knocked out...

"No...no..." Ryan laughed nervously, "Sleeping. He's sleeping." but massive roars interrupted the droid's explanation. Round Two had just begun and there were too many players on the field.

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 Post Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 4:11 pm    Post subject:
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Ryan Davad was stranded in the middle of eight rancor as they roared loudly. Their prey circled in a mighty victory. The alpha female stepped forward, according to the rancor files on his database, this meant it was her young. A lethal opponent was a female rancor. An angry, now 'motherless' rancor was far worse. The very brush under it's feet cracked and shattered into oblivion.

Ryan took a step back, but two males roared to prevent him from moving any further. The Human Replica droid paused for a moment, closing his eyes. His thinking process sped to an immeasurable amount of speed as he reviewed his entire existence.

Alatáriël.

His angel....yet she believed he had hated her. She believed the love was gone between them. Ryan's eyes twitched painfully as the memories of Geonosis, Independence II, Mon Calamari and so many others came to into his mind. Her gentle and warm smile brought a smile to Ryan's face. Her wings, the ever feathery whiteness. The Angelic Glory, he would see no more.

He opened his eyes and saw the rancor charge. It was the end of the droid's beginning.

‘Tis was the end of Ryan Davad as the galaxy knew him.

The female roar and swing, everything went white for the droid as the sentient life was washed into a new existence.

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 Post Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 11:38 am    Post subject:
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Lucious Victorinox approached the edge of the forest with a battalion of Galactic Alliance troopers. The shots fired by the Davad kid sent a wave of confusion, but it did notify the Rakatan tribe they were visiting a warning of a neighbor attack. It seems they did not like the Alliance reaching out to a rival.

The rancorpack was actually part of their attack force, sadly one of the young appeared to be injured. Lucious came to the scene, the atmospheric flyers, provided by Turbinia, securing the area. He walked towards the body of Ryan and said, "Collect him." He looked at the scene and was repulsed to say the least, but it was instinct.

Lucious turned, without a word or emotion, and boarded the clone war similar transport and was whisked away towards his shuttle. He had precious time to make it towards the Galaxy Ball. He activated a holotransmission to his old friend, Jack, and belayed the news of Ryan Davad.

Alatáriël would be devasted.


Lucious Victorinox is now aboard his ship and it is enroute to Coruscant.

Rakata Prime has gained Galactic Alliance Protectorite [or equivalent status.] Invasions or likewise aggressive actions will be answered by military force.
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