Shivaelius 4, Ioska, Merva Province
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 Post Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 11:31 pm    Post subject: Shivaelius 4, Ioska, Merva Province
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On a planet called Shivaelius 4, in Ioska, int he Merva province, there was a small house on cliff, just looking over to a beautiful beach. Behind the house was nothing but forest. It was dark, and thousands of hung in a beautiful pattern in the night sky. Shivaelius 4's large moon glowed brightly, creating a dim light that reflected off of the ocean and the sand. Though it was beautiful scene outside of the small house, the inside was much different.

There was a little girl, about 8 years old, sitting in her bed and hugging a large teddy bear, only a little smaller than her. She was crying, and there was loud shouting and banging in the room outside of her's....

Suddenly everything got blurry, and an oval opening came to sight. The room was the same, only the angle was different. It was sideways. Suddenly the vision was set upright, tuning in to the world around it. Loud shouting could be heard, and a woman screaming. Several crashes and bangs could be heard as well. Emery rubbed her eyes, staying in her room. There was a loud shout, some cursing, and then heavy footsteps coming towards Emery's door.

Emery closed her eyes, tears fear crawling over her immediatly. She grabbed her teddy bear, though it may have looked silly now, as she was much older. The door slid open, and in came a large man. He stood at about 6'4, weighing 240 lbs. The man was about 45, looking furious. He was also intoxicated, clearly, as he couldn't seem to walk straight.

Emery opened her eyes, looking up at him fearfully. "Daddy...?" She said, quietly. Suddenly Emery's mother ran in. She was about 5'5, weighing 140 lbs. She was beautiful when she was happy...Though that came on rare occasion. She had long blonde hair, and brown eyes. Her cheek had a large bruise on it, and she was frantically tugging on the large man's arm. Emery's father pushed the mother off of him, yelling at her again. Emery scooted away from her father as he stepped towards her bed. Emery was grabbed by the arm, her teddy bear being ripped from her arms and thrown to the side. Emery was lifted into the air by her arm, screaming.

Emery was thrown up against the wall, recieving a back hand to her face. She fell down, clutching her cheek. Her father grunted once, turning to Emery's mother once more. The woman cowared into the corner, and Emery stood up. "Leave her alone!" She shouted, crying frantically. The father instantly turned around and walked towards Emery again. Emery gritted her teeth, clenching her fists. Her father pulled his hand back to strike her again, and suddenly a feeling came over Emery. She opened her eyes, and her father was suddenly lifted into the air and quickly thrown up against the wall. He hit his head hard against it, and fell down, not getting back up. Emery blinked, relaxing. Her mother looked at the father, then at Emery, almost fearing her more. "What have you done...?" She said, going to the father. Emery opened her mouth, as if to say something. No words came out. Emery simply turned and ran out of her room, and out of the house. She had to get out of there...There was no happiness in that place.

Emery ran out, towards the woods behind their house. She ran past several trees, pushing through bushes and jumping over strems. She had no idea how long she ran, she simply went as long as she could. When she finally stopped, starting to walk, she saw that she was at the beach. She looked up the large rock wall, to see the top of the cliff, where her house was. She blinked, looking to her right. She saw the ocean, and slowly trekked the sand and headed towards it.

She was tired now, still crying. She wiped her tears away with her sleeve. She walked up a large layer of rocks that went out into the sea slightly. She walked across the long pattern of rocks, stopping at the end. She climbed a large boulder that sat just at the edge, sitting down on it. She brought her knees to her chest, wrapping her arms around them and resting her chin on her knees.

Emery couldn't help but look into the stars, up from the ocean. Endless opportunities, above and below. There had to be something out there...something more. Something for her. This couldn't be all that she was meant for...Something inside her told her differently. Emery didn't know what had just happend at her house, but she knew she could never go back. She could never face her father again...Nor her mother. Emery stayed there for a long while, burrying her head into her arms and crying, her hazel eyes glistening slightly just before they closed.


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Just being a nitpick, but to keep it from being confusing, it's a rule to not use "episode" names for threads. If you could use the name of the area (usually planet and sometimes a more specific place on the planet, or a ship at a certain planet), that would be appreciated. Although, you can go ahead and give specific posts in an already created thread an episode title.
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Yes, thank you.
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